Draft Essay 2-02b: My favorite place

I’m going to introduce you about my favorite place. My favorite place is my home. There are three particularly favorite rooms in there. One is my room. Two is the living room. Three is the bath room. I’m going to introduce you about three rooms.

The beginning, I introduce you about my home. It’s in the southern part of KUMAMOTO City and the country. A rural landscape spread out as far as the eye can see. People of the area where I live are very gentle and heart-warming. And I like a peculiar to smell of my home. I can breathe a sigh of relief when I get back to there from the university and the part-time job.

First, I’m going to introduce you about my room in my home. My room is about six mat room and places bed, desk, closet and dressing table. There isn’t television. Furniture is few. I don’t know why, but I feel that things are much and my room is mixed up together. Furniture is few but small articles are many in my room. But it’s a point of that I can breathe a sigh of relief. And I introduce you about my favorite furniture. It’s my bed. My bed is particular because it’s low repulsion bed. It’s very comfortable bed as I’m able to soon fall asleep and have good sleep.

Second, I’m going to introduce you about the living room. There are of the living room is more than three times the area of my room. And the living room is the place where my family gets together. Everybody stay in there when we eat dinner and watch TV. The living room is a symbol of the pleasure of a happy home. And there is a lot of furniture. There are television, two tables, sofa, dressing table, computer and many photos of my family in the living room. When it’s fall and winter, a table changes to a kotatsu; covered table with a heat source underneath. And an ordinary carpet changes to an electrical hot carpet and a gas fan heater appears on the living room. And we eat oranges and one-pot dish cooked on the kotatsu together. Sometimes, my mother and sister sleep in kotatsu because it and the electrical hot carpet are very hot and comfortable.

Third, I’m going to introduce you about the bath room. I like there because I love taking a bath. I take in the bath tub more twenty minutes every day. I disliked taking in there until I was an elementary schoolchild. I don’t know why, but I gradually liked taking in there. Now, I’m in the bath room about one time every day and I recover from the fatigue of my journey. It’s very relax time for me. And I do facial massage every day while I take in the bath. It’s also very relax time.

Considering the circumstances mentioned above, my favorite place is my home. Sometimes, I think that I want to live by myself after I graduate from this university. Because my hometown is very country and my family is very faultfinding. But I realized happiness that my family and hometown is very pleasant place for me. The whole my home is my favorite place.

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Draft Essays 2-02a: My favorite place

Hello! Everyone! This time, I’m going to introduce you about that the most my favorite place. It is my home. It’s in the southern part of Kumamoto City and the country. A rural landscape spread out as far as the eye can see. People of my hometown are very gentle and heartwarming. And I like a peculiar to smell of my home. I can breathe a sigh of relief when I go back to there from the university and the part-time job. I’m going to introduce you about three rooms where among of my home, I can breathe a sigh of relief.

At the first, I introduce you about my room. It’s about a six-mat and there are bed, desk and closet in my room. Furniture is few. I don’t know why, but I feel that things are much and my room is mixed up together. But it’s a point of that I’m able to breathe a sigh of relief. There are two windows in my room. So, it’s very cold when it’s winter and it’s very hot when it’s summer. So, it became gradually cold now. And sunlight from the windows is very strong. But I can wake up with the morning sun when sunlight enters throw the window. And I can breathe a sigh of relief and happy when I go to bed. Because I changed a before ordinary bedding to a new low repulsion bedding recently. It’s very comfortable. And I like a peculiar to smell of my room. I can be composed so I mostly stay in my room when I stay in my home.

At the second, I introduce you about the bath room. I like there because I love taking a bath. I take in a bath tub more twenty minutes every day. I disliked taking in there when I was a child. I don’t know why, but I gradually liked taking in there. Now I’m in the bath room about an hour every day and I recover from the fatigue of my journey. It’s very relax time for me. And I do facial massage every day while I take in a bath tub. It’s also very relax time. That’s why the bath room is a one of my favorite rooms.

Lastly at the third, I introduce you about the living room. There is the place where my family gets together. Everybody stay in there when we eat dinner and watch TV. There are TV, tables, sofa and snacks in the living room. When it’s fall and winter a table changes to a kotatsu; covered table with a heat source underneath. And an ordinary carpet changes to an electrical hot carpet and a gas fan heater appears on the living room when it’s winter. That’s why my family tends to gather in there than usual. And we eat oranges and one-pot dish cooked at a kotatsu together. When it’s winter, my mother and sister often sleep while they enter in a kotatsu. I appreciate it’s very pleasant but it often makes people caught colds. But the living room is surely the favorite room for my family, too. And I love an atmosphere in there when it’s winter. I feel like heartwarming and breathe a sigh of relief because there are a kotatsu, a hot carpet and oranges on a kotatsu and everybody encircle around a kotatsu. That’s why the living room is a one of my favorite rooms.

I have any other favorite rooms in my home, such as the kitchen, the garden, the toilets and a Japanese-style room. Sometimes I would like to think that leave out from my home and Kumamoto Prefecture. And I would like to think that live by myself in unknown place. But I love my home and Kumamoto prefecture after all because I’m able to breathe a sigh of relief. After all, the most my favorite place is my home.

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Essay prep. My favorite places

I’m going to introduce about my favorite places. They are my home, my grandparents’ home and my office. I can make myself at home when I stay in these places.

At first, I’m going to introduce about my home. It’s in the southern part of Kumamoto city and the country. A rural landscape spread out as far as the eye can see. I like this landscape it makes me breathed a sigh of relief. And people of the area where I live in are very gentle and heartwarming. I always change greetings to them when I see in the roads. They always call out to me “Good morning”, “Hello” and “Home back”. And my home is the most favorite relax place for me. I like a peculiar to smell of my home. I can breathe a sigh of relief when I go back to there from the university and a part-time job. The most favorite relax rooms for me are my room and the living room. My room is about a six-mat room and places bed, desk and closet. Furniture is few. I don’t know why, but I feel that things are much and my room is mixed up together. But it’s a point of that I can breathe a sigh of relief. I mostly stay in my room while I am in my home. And the living room is the place where my family gets together. Everybody stay in there when we eat dinner and watch TV. There are TV, tables, sofa and snacks in the living room. When it’s fall and winter, a table changes to a kotatsu; covered table with a heat source underneath. And ordinary carpet changes to an electrical hot carpet and a gas fan heater appears on the living room. That’s why my family tends to gather in there than before. And we eat oranges and one-pot dish cooked at the table together. That’s why my home is the most favorite place.

Next, I’m going to introduce about my grand parents’ home. My grandparents’ home of my mother’s side manages a liquor shop. There are alcohol drinks, foods, snacks, drinks, magazines, lottery and ice creams in there. There is a Paradise for me because I eat many snacks at any time. That’s why I always stayed in my grandparents’ home and I skive off a nursery school when I was a little child. I often go to there by car and bicycle until now because there is next to the area of my home. And my favorite relax rooms in my grandparents’ home are the living room and the Japanese-style room. There are TV, tables, snacks and sofa in the living room. When it’s fall and winter, a table changes to a kotatsu and a gas fan heater appears on there. And there are household Buddhist alter, table and mat in the Japanese-style room. I always visit a household Buddhist alter when I go to my grandparents’ home. I have been fallen into this habit since I remembered. Thanks to this habit, I have been able to strike a match since I was a child. That’s why my grandparents’ home is a one of my favorite places.

Lastly, I’m going to introduce about my office. I work on the foods shop in a Department store. I work three times a week and eight times a day as my art-time job. My part-time job is a register. There are foods, vegetables, drinks, alcohol drinks, snacks and meats in the foods shop. I have worked in there for about three months and I got skilled a little. I feel quite at home in my office because all employees are very gentle and kind. I work in a very good office and I can hold out my job even if I work a difficult job. And sometimes my friends visit to my office to that they watch me so I become too shy and foppish every time. They don’t buy merchandises anything and only watch me and go back. My office is a one of my favorite places with one thing and another.

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