2-03b: Revised Essay

Hello everyone! This time, I’m going to introduce everybody about Julia Roberts. Do you know her? Have you heard her name? Surely, you know her because you study “Notting Hill” in the listening class. Her real name is Julia Fiona Roberts, and her age is 45. She has worked long time. Her birthplace is United States. The height is 175 centimeter. She appears a lot of movies and she is a very famous actress. “Mirror Mirror” is a movie quite recently and she appeared the part of a bad witch in it. Did you see it in the theater? I wait for DVD of “Mirror Mirror”, I want to see it quickly. This time, I’m going to introduce everybody about three movies, family, and awards and other movies and scandal on herself.

At the first, I introduce “Valentine’s Day”. Have you seen it? The movie was shown in 2010, and love story. The movie director is Garry Marshall. She appeared the part of a soldier on the American armed forces, and her official name was Kate. Co-stars are Ann Hathaway, Taylor Swift, Jessica Alba, Jessica Biel, and Bradly Cooper, etc. The movie drew Valentine’s Day of each ten couples who live in Los Angeles. And it is collection of short stories. I saw the movie. Each short stories were very interesting and moving, I was moved to tears. I thought that the movie was a very heart-warming movie after I saw. I recommend the movie “Valentine’s Day” to everybody.And this director “Garry Marshall” is a wonderful director in the world. He has ever invented lots of hit movies. For example, “Runaway Bride”, “The Princess Diaries”, “Raising Helen”, and “The Princess Diaries 2: Royal Engagement”, etc. He invented masterpieces of love movies and he is genius. “The Princess Diaries” is my favorite movie, too. I want to see the movies, I only heard the director was “Garry Marshall”. I am looking forward to seeing the movies which he will invent in the future.

Next, I introduce about “Pretty Woman”. Have you seen it? This movie is my favorite movie because it is very interesting and pretty story. Maybe, Girls like this movie. She played in a call girl at this movie. The name is vivian ward, and she played in a poor woman. She was poor woman at first, but she meet one man. After she met him, she changed her life. He is too rich man and he likes her on the movie. She fall in love him and the end is happy end. This movie is love story. This movie is called cinderella story by everyone. This movie has dream for girls. Her partner’s actor is Richard Gere. He is too cool, so he is much the role. And director is Garry Marshall. He is nice director. So This movie is very good for everyone. in this movie, she is so cute and sexy. If you are free, why don’t you watching this movie?

Third, I introduce Notting Hill. You know or have you ever watched the movie? Notting Hill is a Love story which happens between a divorced man in the UK and an actress tremendously popular among people. The role of Julia Roberts is Anna: she is an actress. In fact, Julia Roberts is also a real actress today. So we think her performance is like herself. She was thinking about the suffering as an actress while playing the role of Anna when she made the film with others. For instance, if she wanted to get along with other people equally, they would not have treated her as a human equal with others because she is a tremendously popular actress. Surely, she experienced the suffering on real life. I seemed to see her role of Anna performance is simply and cheerful personality. I think there are many things we can sympathize on this movie. For instance, the feeling of love which we can’t get along with him well,  So please watch this movie, if you didn’t watch it yet.

I introduce about Julia Roberts’ family. Her family is a husband and the twins of boy and girl and a boy. She got married once in 1993, but it was divorced in 1995. And she got married again to a movie cameraman in 2002.

She had scandals on herself. She was acquainted with a lot of actors. She was engaged with Kiefer Sutherland, but she didn’t marry with him. After that, she went to trip with Jason Patric. He is closed Kiefer Sutherland. In 1993, She married with Lyle Lovett, but she discover in 1995. And she has an affair with Daniel Moder and she married him in 2002.

And I introduce that many awards which she was awarded a prize. She was awarded a prize Golden Globe Award of the Best Supporting Actress on “Steel Magnolias” which was shown in 1989. And she was awarded a prize Golden Globe Award for Best Actress-Motion Picture Musical or Comedy on “Pretty Woman”. She became the candidate the Academy Award on “Steel Magnolias” and she was nominated for the Academy Award on “Pretty Woman”. She was awarded a prize Academy Award for Best Actress on “Elin Brockovich” which was sown in 2000.

Or I introduce that other on her movies. It is “Larry Crowne” Her role is a lazy teacher of speaking at Community College. A man; Larry Crowne who was dismissed from a Supermarket enters there to reemploy other work. They met together and birth a comedy drama. If you watch it, you can see her different performance as an actress in comparison with some movie which we wrote as above.

That is why; Julia Roberts has a great power and depth of her performance. She has a great ability as an actress. As the evidence, she gained many prizes and she has been as a famous actress from her childhood to now; she is 45 years old. Isn’t it great? So we recommend you to watch the movie played her. Thank you for reading.

References

Karz, Mike, & Rice, Allan, Wayne, (Producers) & Marshall, Garry, (Director).b (2010). Valentine’s Day. United States: Warner Bros. Entertainment, Inc.

Milchan, Arnon, & Reuther, Steven, (Producers) & Marshall, Garry, (Director). (1990). Pretty Woman. United States: Buena Vista Pictures Distribution.

Kenworthy, Duncan, (Producer) & Michell, Roger, (Director). (1999). Notting Hill. United Kingdom: Universal Pictures.

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Essay 2-03a: Joint Movie Review about Julia Roberts

Hello everyone! This time, I’m going to introduce everybody about Julia Roberts. Do you know her? Have you heard her name? Surely, you know her because you study “Notting Hill” in the listening class. Her real name is Julia Fiona Roberts, and her age is 45. She has worked long time. Her birthplace is United States. The height is 175 centimeter. She appears a lot of movies and she is a very famous actress. “Mirror Mirror” is a movie quite recently and she appeared the part of a bad witch in it. Did you see it in the theater? I wait for DVD of “Mirror Mirror”, I want to see it quickly. This time, I’m going to introduce everybody about three movies, family, and awards and other movies and scandal on herself.

At the first, I introduce “Valentine’s Day”. Have you seen it? The movie was shown in 2010, and love story. The movie director is Garry Marshall. She appeared the part of a soldier on the American armed forces, and her official name was Kate. Co-stars are Ann Hathaway, Taylor Swift, Jessica Alba, Jessica Biel, and Bradly Cooper, etc. The movie drew Valentine’s Day of each ten couples who live in Los Angeles. And it is collection of short stories. I saw the movie. Each short stories were very interesting and moving, I was moved to tears. I thought that the movie was a very heart-warming movie after I saw. I recommend the movie “Valentine’s Day” to everybody.

Next, I introduce about “Pretty Woman”. Have you seen it? This movie is my favorite movie because it is very interesting and pretty story. Maybe, Girls like this movie. She played in a call girl at this movie. The name is vivian ward, and she played in a poor woman. She was poor woman at first, but she meet one man. After she met him, she changed her life. He is too rich man and he likes her on the movie. She fall in love him and the end is happy end. This movie is love story. This movie is called cinderella story by everyone. This movie has dream for girls. Her partner’s actor is Richard Gere. He is too cool, so he is much the role. And director is Garry Marshall. He is nice director. So This movie is very good for everyone. in this movie, she is so cute and sexy. If you are free, why don’t you watching this movie?

Third, I introduce Notting Hill. You know or have you ever watched the movie? Notting Hill is a Love story which happens between a divorced man in the UK and an actress tremendously popular among people. The role of Julia Roberts is Anna: she is an actress. In fact, Julia Roberts is also a real actress today. So we think her performance is like herself. She was thinking about the suffering as an actress while playing the role of Anna when she made the film with others. For instance, if she wanted to get along with other people equally, they would not have treated her as a human equal with others because she is a tremendously popular actress. Surely, she experienced the suffering on real life. I seemed to see her role of Anna performance is simply and cheerful personality. I think there are many things we can sympathize on this movie. For instance, the feeling of love which we can’t get along with him well,  So please watch this movie, if you didn’t watch it yet.

I introduce about Julia Roberts’ family. Her family is a husband and the twins of boy and girl and a boy. She got married once in 1993, but it was divorced in 1995. And she got married again to a movie cameraman in 2002.

She had scandals on herself. She was acquainted with a lot of actors. She was engaged with Kiefer Sutherland, but she didn’t marry with him. After that, she went to trip with Jason Patric. He is closed Kiefer Sutherland. In 1993, She married with Lyle Lovett, but she discover in 1995. And she has an affair with Daniel Moder and she married him in 2002.

And I introduce that many awards which she was awarded a prize. She was awarded a prize Golden Globe Award of the Best Supporting Actress on “Steel Magnolias” which was shown in 1989. And she was awarded a prize Golden Globe Award for Best Actress-Motion Picture Musical or Comedy on “Pretty Woman”. She became the candidate the Academy Award on “Steel Magnolias” and she was nominated for the Academy Award on “Pretty Woman”. She was awarded a prize Academy Award for Best Actress on “Elin Brockovich” which was sown in 2000.

Or I introduce that other on her movies. It is “Larry Crowne” Her role is a lazy teacher of speaking at Community College. A man; Larry Crowne who was dismissed from a Supermarket enters there to reemploy other work. They met together and birth a comedy drama. If you watch it, you can see her different performance as an actress in comparison with some movie which we wrote as above.

That is why; Julia Roberts has a great power and depth of her performance. She has a great ability as an actress. As the evidence, she gained many prizes and she has been as a famous actress from her childhood to now; she is 45 years old. Isn’t it great? So we recommend you to watch the movie played her. Thank you for reading.

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BR 2-18: The Burglar's Breakfast

Breakfast was his main meal of the day. (P.5)

This time, I’m going to introduce everybody a book that the burglar likes breakfast. His name is Alfie Briggs. Breakfast was his main meal of the day. He always ate at least three courses. Breakfast is my main meal of the day, too. This morning, I ate miso soup, oden, stewed dish beef and Japanese white radish, steamed bun, and confectionery. Oden is a Japanese dish containing all kinds of ingredients cooked in a special broth of soy sauce, sugar, sake, etc. Do you eat your fill breakfast every morning? I eat my fill every morning. In this story, someone had stolen Alifie’s breakfast. And he tracked down the thief and got back his breakfast. But no cornflakes, no eggs, no sardines, no waffles. His breakfast was stolen. He felt hungry and there was only one thing left to do. He would have to go out for breakfast. As he drunk his coffee at a café, he glanced at a newspaper. He took a closer look and it was an advertisement for help about detective. “I can do all of these things!” thought Alfie. And he became a detective, he never stole another thing-not even breakfast. It’s a very good story and it was very good for me. The first thing the pictures were so cute and I chosen this book. While I read, I felt hungry as the pictures of breakfast are so cute and great relish. To return to my main topic, it’s a very good story. I thought that he was very great as for that changed his position burglar to detective. I respect him. His life changed by a strange chance. I thought that fortune is lying one’s neighborhood and it’s up to oneself to carve out a career. I might have missed seeing my fortune by now or paid no attention to it. I couldn’t put my idea into action because I’m too lazy and coward. I have been wanted to change myself for a long time. I follow Alfie’s example and I want to challenge everything steadily from now on. I want to change my position on my mental. I plung into the terrible world and I want to amaze, be at a loss, and waver every day.

                               Reference

Everett, Felicity. (2002). The burglar’s breakfast. London, England. Usborne

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BR 2-17: Wizards

But before he left, he gave the king and queen a magic sack of gold which would never run out. (P.46)

Do you believe in the existence of magicians? I have ever believed in it. And I have been wanted to be a witch for a long time. Do you want to be a magician, too? This time, I’M going to introduce everybody a book about wizard. I chosen this book because a cover of it was very cute and I like magician. If you would be a magician, what do you want to do? In my case, I want to fly in the air and travel around the world by broomstick. In this book, there are three good wizards, who helped people and bad ones, who cast evil spells. But this story was different form that I imagine an enchanced world. I imagine that an enchanced world is very romantic like Harry Potter movies. Harry Potter’s world is my ideal. I want to plunge in the world. But I don’t want to do battles with a lot of bad magicians. To be magician is my everlasting dream. If I were born again, I would like to be a magician. Do you want to be it, too? I want to be a magician, but I thought that maybe present-day life is better off than an enchanced world. Because if it exists magic in the present age, it has lots of crimes every day than now. It will be so terrible world. I think that humankind will be very avarise still more if it exist magic in the world. Whatever things will go smoothy and easy and early. Everybody wants to be magician. But the world would go to ruin if all humankind are magician. That’s why humankind maybe is not able to use magic. If whatever things go smoothy and easy and early, we can’t absolutely get pleasures achieve over aim. I thought that only a god can use magic.

                                Reference

Rawson, Christopher. (2002). Wizards. London, England. Usborne

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Mind-map

Free-writing Julia Roberts

I'm going to introduce everybody about Julia Roberts' movies.
I watched "Valentine's Day". It's a very good story and impression.
This movie impressed me deeply and I was moved to tears.
And she is a wonderful character actress.

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Essay prep.

My teammates are Mayu and Hiromi.
We chosen Julia Roberts.
I'm going to watch Valentine's Day.

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